Elbereth Its not "heavy metal" per say...
But its a really, really nice beat. and you did some fantasic work on it. Fruity loops isn't too good when it comes to metal..I perfer to record my own riffs with my guitar rather then use fruity loops to try. I'm assuming thats what you used.
But with all that said, you did a very nice job. Just got the genre mixed up a bit. :) Keep it up.